Also, I'm prepared for this section to remain brief, but could you possibly add anything else? It won't hurt the possible GA status if you don't, but it couldn't hurt either.Fixed 和DITOR E tails 22:13, 12 October 2013 (UTC) Reply.I think the plural verbs would work best here given the use of the word "their". However, I notice the group " is known for their frequent collaborations" but " have released mixtapes together". I know some people refer to groups with singular verbs, others (like myself) with plural (funny considering that, to my knowledge, is the traditional British usage and I've never even been to Britain).Removed 和DITOR E tails 22:13, 12 October 2013 (UTC) Reply."…during their promotional tours" This statement is unnecessary.Rewrite 和DITOR E tails 22:13, 12 October 2013 (UTC) Reply."The album spawned four singles, all of which received music videos:…".和DITOR E tails 22:13, 12 October 2013 (UTC) Reply I'm not sure, but I've changed it to overly."over-the-top" Is this word okay for an encyclopedia?.Done 和DITOR E tails 22:13, 12 October 2013 (UTC) Reply.和DITOR E tails 21:04, 12 October 2013 (UTC) Reply Lead It may take a bit for me to respond, since I'm doing expansion of the article Hold Your Fire, but I promise I'll fix em as soon as possible. I should have something here by the end of the day.
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